Something I leaned about procedural writing is you need a list of ingredients.
Something I would like to do better is use more adverbs.
Here is my writing.
How to make delicious jelly pops.
What do you need?
- Cold water (½ cup)
- A whisk
- Boiling water 1 cup
- Fruit sticks
- Party cups
- A jug/bowl
- Measuring cup
- Jelly crystals
1 Prepare the party cups upright on a flat surface.
2 Pour the boiling water into the measuring cup .
3 Tip the jelly crystals into boiling water and stir till dissolved.
4 Add the cold water into the measuring cup.
5 Carefully pour the jelly into the party cups.
6 Take the fruit sticks and stick them into the party cups.
7 Take the jelly pops and pop them in the fridge to set.8 ENJOY.