I
am learning to
- Make my writing more interesting and easier to read
Success
Criteria
- Include many ideas in my stories.
- Put a capital letter that the beginning of each idea.
- Put a full stop at the end of each idea.
I am good at riding because I go fast. I love it. It was fun. I ride it when I go to the park.
Teacher Feedback
Kaela, you have included five ideas in your story and you have put fullstops at the end of most of your ideas.
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